Score: 9

"The game has its ups and downs."

submission: Red Moon

date: April 25, 2009

Introduction~
Red Moon is an eerie, fast-paced, and well thought out platformer. I find that the characters were very easy on the ears and eyes, as opposed to some flash animations that give me headaches from all he bright colors. The red background really set the tone, and it was a pleasure to play this game.
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Graphics~
The characters looked very natural during cutscenes. I thoroughly enjoyed the ending, where (SPOILER ALERT OMG) Eivana and Hawken get their asses kicked by Vandeer. Who was it who intervened? Was that Armed With Wings?

During gameplay, the dramatic silhouette style shone. You should make a Blackmist animated series, chronicling a little bit further into the story, because I really would like to see more of this style.

Ending statement-
A solid 10/10 for graphics.
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Controls~
I hit a few problems here. Wall jumping was kicking in when you don't want it to, and crapping out on you when you need it to work. The floors must have been icy or Eivana must have been rollerskating, because I ended up sliding everywhere, and falling off cliffs.
Also, attacks were okay; charging up was not. The charge up attacks were useless, and there should have been a few more attack buttons like from Armed With Wings 2.

Ending statement-
A 6/10 at most for controls.
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Audio~
Great. The music was fantastic, and kept me playing. (How do you get that last CD...?)

Ending statement-
After barely any embellishing, the music was a perfect 10.
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Actionscript~

HOLY JESUS IN A SAILBOAT.
I need to learn how to make enemies follow the player and how to give them health, so I find it to be like a miracle. The fact that it had awards was amazing, too. Did Tom already come out with the awards embedding?

Ending statement-
10/10. Can you teach me some AS?
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Other~
Nice touch at the end with Eivana. She just gets the short end of the stick in every game. She got (SPOILERS OMG) stabbed in Armed With Wings 2, sliced apart in Red Moon, and I don't think she was even IN Armed With Wings 1.
I also noticed that recently, each game ends with the player losing. Talk about hollow victories.

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Score: 7

"Decent."

submission: Vinegar Battery Project

date: April 8, 2009

You explained it rather nicely, and there are minimal spelling and grammar issues.
Like when you had it say "zink". It's spelled Zinc.
/Scientific assholery
You're getting better.
You get a 7/10, because there should have been music, a little more interactivity (It says "Play This Game", so I expect there to be gaming), and a more scientific font could have nailed it, like Microsoft Unicode MS, and you could have made it type out, and have that little flashy box/underscore at the end.
But, you did a decent job.
On another note: What grade did you get?

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Still waiting to be unblocked,
<3Lunar

Score: 10

"AHA! I got it!"

submission: Shiftlimits:Galaxy Collab

date: April 3, 2009

This was orgasmic. I swear, this was great.
Animation- 10/10
Fucking brilliant. Miccool's planet twirl was genius.
Graphics- 10/10
Very good for sticks.
Humor- 10/10
How can I give any less for a "holy god. SPACE WALRUS!!"?
Audio- 10/10
Nice choice. It was The Arctic Monkeys performing "You Couldn't See For The Lights But You Were Staring Straight At Me", for those who don't know.
Arctic Monkeys ftw.

Overall- 10/10
A sleek, satisfying animation about stick figures kicking ass...IN SPACE.

<3Lunar

Score: 7

"Lacked the MK feel, but was decently performed."

submission: Mortal Kombat Theme ~Remix~

date: May 22, 2009

I mean, it sounded like you'd hear it in a strip club...
However, you got many of the notes correct, and it wasn't too bad.
Decent. Next time, try to stick with the original feel...

Score: 10

"Epic lulz"

submission: Epic Lulz

date: April 10, 2009

Great. I loved how you had the little news report on Anonymous at the beginning, and then made a song of it...
This was done for the lulz.

Score: 10

"Custom Robo?"

submission: [tf] Rising Tensions

date: March 22, 2009

The beginning had me thinking "I FRIGGIN LOVE CUSTOM ROBO"
You should definitely make more of these songs :3